Monday 22 September 2014

cross country

Last thursday Pt England school had their cross country run. The kids
were waiting and waiting for the races to begin. The sun wrapped it’s warm arms around me and it felt like I was melting like an ice cube. I saw the children wearing silly wigs and amusing costumes.


Out of the corner of my eye, I saw my house captains run up to the front of the crowd  cheering for their teams and all the children were cheering with them.  


Finally it was the year 4 girls turn. When I heard the  clapper I bolted across the starting line.
My legs were sore but I was still going until I got to the to the finish line.

Thursday 11 September 2014

goldilocks and the three bears



I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.


One sunny day i was
sitting on my swing watching  the bird  fly past.Mum told me don’t  go  down to the  forest.  I so this little rabbit hopping around my back  yard. So i decided  to run after the little rabbit. I remember that i was in the woods I found  myself at this house i look into the window but no one was there.I
open the door i side i anybody home i went to the chin and there was three bowl  on the table. I cried the big bowl  but it was to hot. I cried the medium bowl it was too hot. I cried the small bowl it was just right then i ate it all up.I went into the lang and i so three cher. I cried the big cher but it was too big.I cried the medium cher but it was too big.then i cried  the little cher and it was just right.Then i went upstairs


Goldilocks[edit]

Wednesday 3 September 2014